Nice little piece about Hoshi and Phlox! I can sympathise with the difficulty of writing characters one doesn't usually write, but you passed the test with flying colours! The moment I really loved, though, was this:
Hoshi had stared at him, he’d stared right back at her and by mutual babbled apologies they’d hurried in opposite directions.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2008-09-15 05:15 pm (UTC)Hoshi had stared at him, he’d stared right back at her and by mutual babbled apologies they’d hurried in opposite directions.
I could so much picture that! *grins*